For the past couple weeks we have been learning about poetry. I have learnt about writing in second person. We do this so the reader thinks they are in the book. I learnt that poems use the 5 senses.
This is the poem I made about rugby
Your mum packs your heavy bag
You sleep soundly
The stench of the changing room burns my nose
Your opponents are like giants
Moving like rhinos
When it is half time you eat the fresh cut up oranges
The tallest person runs past your hole team like a tank on a battle field
You sub on our best player
The game was a draw
You line up and shake hands
You have fish and chips
Smells like a fresh cake
You eat all the chips as fast as lightning
When you go home your dad gives you 3 dollars
Because you got three tries!!!
